The feedback we got regarding our pitch was fairly good. Dan said we had a good pitch however there was room for improvement. Our blog posts were not up to date also there were gaps within our blog posts meaning some blog posts were done before others. Dan said he liked our title, which was influence by the movie "Se7en". We will ensure our blogposts are up to date also ensure a storyboard and planning is up within the next few days.
3 targets to be completed in response to teacher feedback
1. Ensure all blogposts are completed and up to date.
2. To ensure a storyboard and planning evidence is up on the blog within the next few days.
3. To add pictures of our props and costumes to the blog so that its more clear on the type of title
sequence we are attempting to create.
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